By "sketch of" I am comparing your writing to the preliminary drawing an artist makes for a big project. You have enough ideas here to make a much longer fic. You have interesting ideas and lovely interior voices for both our heroes. I would look forward to read moooooooooore.
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carisma_sensei
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Date: 2013-05-23 08:30 pm (UTC)